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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Structure of the Article:
P1 |
Introduction |
P2 |
First period |
P3 |
Second period |
P4 |
Third period |
P5 |
Fourth period |
P6 |
Conclusion |
Alternative Structure:
P1 |
Introduction |
P2 |
Periods one-three |
P3 |
Period four and conclusion |
Band 5 | Band 6 | Band 7+ |
build; “be” built |
construct; “be” constructed |
establish; “be” established, found, “be” founded |
image picture |
Map / plan |
Diagram / Illustration |
show |
describe, present |
depict, illustrate, details |
people, person, population |
occupant, populace |
resident, inhabitant, denizen |
time |
period |
phase, stage, juncture |
build train tracks, road, motorway |
Lay train tracks, Railway lines |
Modes of transportation, thoroughfare |
grow a lot get bigger |
grow significantly, develop, Lengthen, Widen |
spread, expand, migrated southward, cover (v) a (substantially) larger area grow exponentially, |
become two times bigger |
become twice as large |
double (v) |
next |
then, after that |
Subsequently, successively, next in the sequence |
Beside, next to Near |
along the (south side of the) road, connecting |
adjacent to (adj), bordering (n), alongside, in proximity |
“be” next to |
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border (v), neighbor (v), neighboring (n), contiguous to/with, nestled between A and B, in the vicinity of |
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match |
correspond with |
part, zone, area |
neighborhood |
region, expanse |
Model Sentence Structures
Band 5 |
The map shows a town called Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994. |
Band 6 |
Given is a map that presents information about a village called Chorleywood and how it developed from 1868 to 1994. |
Band 7+ |
Given is a map which depicts how the village of Chorleywood developed between 1868 and 1994. |
Band 5 |
After that, it grew a lot around the railway station. |
Band 6 |
Second, from 1883 to 1922, this village grew at the southwest all around the railway station, which was built in 1909. |
Band 7+ |
In the second period, starting in 1883 and ending in 1922, Chorleywood expanded to the southwest, as residents started spreading around the railway station. |
Band 5 |
Chorleywood was much bigger at the end, and… |
Band 6 |
In conclusion, this village grew a lot during these years. |
Band 7+ |
In summary, it is clear from this map not only that S V, but also that S V. |
First(ly), second(ly), etc. |
Firstly, the number of guitars sold decreased from January to February. |
Then, |
Then, there was a rapid increase between February and May in the number of guitars sold. |
After that, |
After that, the figure climbed slowly, reaching eight units in July. |
In the next (month), |
In the next month, the number of guitars sold decreased back to six units. |
Next, |
Next, the number of guitars sold rose marginally from August to September. |
Subsequently, |
Subsequently, a growth of four units took place between October and December. |
See more details.
Following N, S V. S V following N.
Following the construction of a highway, the city doubled in size. The city doubled in size following the construction of a highway.
With the building of a shopping mall, the city expanded westward. The city expanded westward with the building of a shopping mall.
After N, S V. After S V, S V. S V after S V. S V after N.
After graduation, students apply for jobs. After students graduate, they apply for jobs. Students apply for jobs after they graduate. Students apply for jobs after graduation.
As soon as S V, S V. S V as soon as S V.
As soon as the potatoes are chopped, they are fried. The potatoes are fried as soon as they are chopped.
S subsequently V. S then V. S next V.
The city subsequently erected a radio tower. The city then erected a radio tower. The city next erected a radio tower.
S V and then V. S V and subsequently V. S V and next V.
The coach gives instructions and then chooses participants. The coach gives instructions and subsequently chooses participants. The coach gives instructions and next chooses participants.
the subsequent N the following N the next N
The subsequent stage began in 1975. The following stage began in 1975. The next stage began in 1975.
S V, and then S V S V, and after that, S V.
The cloth is measured, and then it is cut. The cloth is measured, and after that, it is cut.
Sample Answer:
The map shows a town called Chorleywood from 1868 to 1994. The town grew a lot during the four periods on the map.
First, from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood was a small town next to the main road. After that, it grew a lot around the railway station. The railway station was built in 1909.
In the third period, from 1922-1970, the city added new parts on both sides. In the last time, from 1970 to 1994, Chorleywood had new parts around the new motorway. The motorway was built in 1970.
Chorleywood was much bigger at the end, and there was Chorleywood Park and Golf Course.
Given is a map that presents information about a village called Chorleywood and how it developed from 1868 to 1994. Overall, the growth happened in four stages.
First, from 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood was a small village next to a main road.
Second, from 1883 to 1922, this village grew at the southwest all around the railway station, which was built in 1909. The new part was twice as big as the old part.
Third, from 1922 to 1970, they added two new sections on each side. These are very big and are on the south side of the railway.
Fourth, from 1970 to 1994, the city got much bigger. They built a motorway next to Chorleywood Park and Golf Course in 1970, and then people built the city on both sides.
In conclusion, this village grew a lot during these years. Also, they built a railway, a railway station, and a motorway.
Given is a map which depicts how the village of Chorleywood developed between 1868 and 1994. As illustrated, there are four main stages of growth.
During the first phase, which began in 1868 and lasted fifteen years, there was just a very small group of people living between a main road and the Chorleywood Park.
In the second period, starting in 1883 and ending in 1922, Chorleywood subsequently expanded to the southwest, as residents started spreading around the railway station, which was constructed in 1909. At the end of this period, Chorleywood was more than three times as large as its original size.
The town grew even larger during the third stage, which started in 1922 and continued until 1970. Then, instead of congregating around the station, residents migrated along the southern side of the railway, opposite the Chorleywood Park.
Finally, between 1970 and 1994, the village covered a much larger area than it had over the first period. In this final 24-year period, there was a huge number of buildings established along the two sides of the new motorway, which was built to the east in 1970.
In summary, it is clear from this map not only that the town grew exponentially over this 126-year period, but also that this growth corresponded with the town’s development of transportation.
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